Having trouble pacing part of my fantasy story properly.

2021.12.08 12:35 Sulipheoth Having trouble pacing part of my fantasy story properly.

Hi all!
Here's my problem. Early in my rough draft, my character is on the run from a city in the north to the hills in the south. I made things pretty rough from him through all of this, naturally. And I spent 24k words between that city and the hideout in the hills.
Now he's decided to rescue someone from the city up north. He has an unearthly storm to contend with, he has people from the hideout out for his blood (he left at night without explaining himself and they don't trust him), and he also has a bounty on his head from the villain in the city up north. So he has weather, the good guys, and the bad guys all after him, but I don't know how to stretch this part out anywhere close to 24k+ words. Do I have to? Will it "do" to cut this more intense part short, or will that pacing jar the reader? I just don't have a reference point for this.
Thanks in advance!
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